Creative Writing: Fire

This is a repost of an entry from my old blog:

Bronzen Orange
with a hint of
Sensual Scarlet

Their tango
entices me
The passion
palpable

They lick-
They tease-
They want-
They take-
each other

“Sweetheart, dinner’s ready…”

“Coming Love. I was just mesmerized by the dancing flames in the fireplace.”

The fire crackles
Our hands touch
It’s been a while…

The mood is set
Music’s on
We dance

A passionate tango
Fueled by flames
of lust

He licks,
I tease,
We want
We take
each other

onto the white rug in front of the fireplace.

“You’re so hot my darling! More, more!!” as he thrusts even harder to the rhythm of the crackling flames

I’ve missed you so. I love you so!” as I burst into a fiery orgasm.

The fire crackles
Our hands touch
It’s been a while…

“Love, breakfast’s ready…”

“Coming Sweetheart. I was just mezemerized by the still-burning embers in the fireplace.”

9 thoughts on “Creative Writing: Fire

  1. adeeyoyo June 17, 2010 / 9:26 am

    Very, very nice. So like real life – brought down to earth with a bang!

    • Mid-Thirty Misfit June 18, 2010 / 4:03 pm

      adeeyoyo – thank you! My real life “fires” have been somewhat disappointing…

  2. supagran June 18, 2010 / 2:57 pm

    Was it all in her imagination as she stared into the embers?

    • Mid-Thirty Misfit June 18, 2010 / 4:02 pm

      Actually Supa, to be honest with you, I never actually thought about it like that, but I like your interpretation.

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